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with a fanfare that is grand,
sunset creeps across the land,
like a curtain on a play,
hails the ending of today.

watch the birds fly off to sleep,
while the smaller creatures creep,
hear the chirping of the crickets,
while the rabbits hop through thickets.

the light begins to fade,
and growing is the shade,
as the day turns into night,
and the darkness conquers light.

there's a still that's in the air,
when the moon casts its bright glare,
and the owls start to wake,
like the dawn will never break.

and the humans rest their heads,
on their soft and comfy beds,
say their prayers and close their eyes,
muttering their last goodbyes.

and sadly, though, the night can't last,
dawn has come to break its fast,
and light comes again to steal back day,
the sun will reign and have its say.

sun and moon will fight and war,
till the seasons are no more,
though they win and lose their share,
for the sky they both do care.
©2008-2009 =Prosaic-Scriptor
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Randomness that is my day..... eh-heh.

Not one of my best, but hey.

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:iconskywind-the-spirited:
That is absolutely lovelly :heart:

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:iconunluckyshadow13:
Perhaps not your best, but I certainly love it. What fun it is to rhyme.

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The way I see it, you have three choices. You can sink, you can swim, or you can develop a set of gills. Personally, I'd be most impressed by that last one.

I'm going to kill you so hard you will die to death.
:iconprosaic-scriptor:
No kidding, thank you. :D I love rhyming!

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"...for what I had heard was true:
That a poet only writes about the things he cannot do."
:iconprosaic-scriptor:
Why thank you, that really means a lot! :hug:

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"...for what I had heard was true:
That a poet only writes about the things he cannot do."
:iconunluckyshadow13:
It's a wonderful challenge to actually get some sense out of a mishmosh of similair sounds. Far easier in french, though where's the fun in that?

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The way I see it, you have three choices. You can sink, you can swim, or you can develop a set of gills. Personally, I'd be most impressed by that last one.

I'm going to kill you so hard you will die to death.
:iconltcloud9:
I think this is really good! It captures to mood that happens when the day ends..
Nice job! :)
:iconprosaic-scriptor:
Why thank you!

I tried! :O

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"...for what I had heard was true:
That a poet only writes about the things he cannot do."
:iconprosaic-scriptor:
French totally has more rhyming.... :) But then again, I don't speak French too well. :D

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"...for what I had heard was true:
That a poet only writes about the things he cannot do."
:iconunluckyshadow13:
I've heard a couple french rap songs, which is about my extend of the french language outside of common phrases. It helps that all of their words end similairly

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The way I see it, you have three choices. You can sink, you can swim, or you can develop a set of gills. Personally, I'd be most impressed by that last one.

I'm going to kill you so hard you will die to death.

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