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(sea) urchins crawl back to sleep in
a forgotten embrace,
shelled by the bombs of a salty
tide they escaped for now, for then;
sitting on the granite benches,
they wonder at the diffused
light that molests their eyes.

futile to escape,
yet the cannonballs of their tears
bleed down the rugged cracks
of the cliff faces -
run, run, run,
until the man whips the flight
from your wings,
little shrew,
little bird.

did you fight till the beginning?
did you run past the end?

whisper words of wisdom -
of comfort, and dream of the bells
on a hill that you could never see.
but the beatles are beetles and
they're clawing their way up along
with the other man-monsters,
climbing the dips and curves and valleys
of your waist till they reach Neverland
(this will never grow old)

it sleeps for now.
it will awaken again.
ignore it, refuse it,
and it will pervade your skin
as easily as the rust from his
Midas' touch -
but all that glitters
is not gold,

and you are no longer precious.
:iconprosaic-scriptor:

Author's Comments

This probably should have been multiple poems. I'll go back and revise when the sky stops emitting purple smiles.

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:iconskerd22:
I think it likes its epicness.

Very excitingly written.
:iconchief-spazz:
the imagery is spectacular, and its one of those things that people could spend hours trying to understand, because it doesn't make a whole lot of sense reading in the first time.

--
there are no beginnings, only ends.

there are no ends, only beginnings.

The world is doomed, for we have forgotten.

Help me, lest I tear myself apart in grief.

I am not who I was, but rather who I am.

My fish are breeding?!?!?!?!?!

HEHEHEHEHEHEHDIE!
:iconchief-spazz:
I understand now. It's the sea. It's kind of like a riddle.

--
there are no beginnings, only ends.

there are no ends, only beginnings.

The world is doomed, for we have forgotten.

Help me, lest I tear myself apart in grief.

I am not who I was, but rather who I am.

My fish are breeding?!?!?!?!?!

HEHEHEHEHEHEHDIE!
:iconpardonm3:
ignore it, refuse it,
and it will pervade your skin
as easily as the rust from his
Midas' touch -


That part was particularly well-crafted.
:star:
:iconterragabriella:
The way you describe it is great, I really liked it

--
Reality overcomes me, I guess I'm alive...
:iconprosaic-scriptor:
Thanks so much! :hug:

--
If at first you don't succeed, skydiving is not for you.

Before you criticize someone, walk a mile in their shoes. That way, you'll be a mile from them, and you'll have their shoes. -Jack Handy
:iconprosaic-scriptor:
Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :thumbsup:

--
If at first you don't succeed, skydiving is not for you.

Before you criticize someone, walk a mile in their shoes. That way, you'll be a mile from them, and you'll have their shoes. -Jack Handy

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