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the bridge of refracted light breaches
the lens of an iris -
purple petals breathe in
the light of life;
orange on purple,
warm on the mellow.
would a Bee alight on the
velvet lips of night?
to dare and gaze upon
the moon's dim reflection?
--- or mayhap close those rosy lips and
I will clothe myself in that scent
- let me sup upon nectar golden
till I drown on the river
bittersweet---
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:iconltcloud9:
Awesome job! :D
I love the imagery, it has a spring feel to it!

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I like it. I thought of a meadow.

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:iconpardonm3:
Oh, this is dripping with imagery.
Has a bit of an older feel to it, which is lovely.

I love
would a Bee alight on the
velvet lips of night?

I will clothe myself in that scent


& the idea of drowning in a river of nectar.
Great piece. :highfive:
:iconpardonm3:
And I almost forgot the wonderful play on words with 'close those rosy lips', as well as a lot of agreeable sounds (purple petals, light life, close those rosy clothe, myself scent, sup upon).
:iconeatingmyownfears:
beautiful images! :love:

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:D

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