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burst of flavor in my mouth
your tender shell speaks of mint leaves
and icy cold
a lingering memory of the
refrigerator where I left you

(colder tastes better)

i'll bite you in half
straight to your tender middle
you're the only one for me
forever i'll be
your diet coke, baby,
if you'll be my mento

(bubbles in my day
the fizz in my life

let's explode together

mmm)
:iconprosaic-scriptor:

Author's Comments

Ah ha ha ha... I dedicate this to :iconthe-duct-tape:. You are my one and only mento. :rofl: :lmao:

And to :iconladylincoln:. For just being awesome. :D
Yay LitLove!

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:iconltcloud9:
Cool poem! I love the imagery, especially of the first stanza-it reminds me of something refreshing like gum/mints. :D

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:bomb: Kiriban at 9,999!!! :bomb:
:iconholdingbacktears:
This was SOOOO cute! :'D

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--Emo happens--

I don't run away from you, I walk slowly. And It kills me that you don't care enough to stop me.
:iconprosaic-scriptor:
Thank you!

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If at first you don't succeed, skydiving is not for you.

Before you criticize someone, walk a mile in their shoes. That way, you'll be a mile from them, and you'll have their shoes. -Jack Handy
:iconprosaic-scriptor:
Mentooooos!

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If at first you don't succeed, skydiving is not for you.

Before you criticize someone, walk a mile in their shoes. That way, you'll be a mile from them, and you'll have their shoes. -Jack Handy
:iconholdingbacktears:
:3

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--Emo happens--

I don't run away from you, I walk slowly. And It kills me that you don't care enough to stop me.
:iconblueskye27:
Very cool double meanings here. I like it. :clap:
:iconprosaic-scriptor:
Thank you! :D

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If at first you don't succeed, skydiving is not for you.

Before you criticize someone, walk a mile in their shoes. That way, you'll be a mile from them, and you'll have their shoes. -Jack Handy
:iconsibilantesses:
Haha, I like it. I want Junior Mints now. Mmm.

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anyone lived in a pretty how town
(with up so floating many bells down)
spring summer autumn winter
he sang his didn’t he danced his did.

-e. e. cummings
:iconprosaic-scriptor:
Om nom nom...

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If at first you don't succeed, skydiving is not for you.

Before you criticize someone, walk a mile in their shoes. That way, you'll be a mile from them, and you'll have their shoes. -Jack Handy

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